these are all great, but I think spwinkles works so well because the reader picks up little clues along the way (the legs, the fries, the potty in the car) that lead to the realization it's heartbreak we're watching. and you cap it off by the jarring shift back to "normal" talk at check-in.
these are all great, but I think spwinkles works so well because the reader picks up little clues along the way (the legs, the fries, the potty in the car) that lead to the realization it's heartbreak we're watching. and you cap it off by the jarring shift back to "normal" talk at check-in.
Man, Spwinkles was so good! A well deserved win!!
Excellent as always.